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Under Appreciated 04



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9th September 2012
 


4 Comments:
 
7 months ago #8595736      

@geek96boolean10
I thought the same thing, too! Talus' hands look more human-like to emphasize the grabbing.



9 months ago #8510965      

@Gatchan and @geek96boolean10 different hook.
right:small left:big



9 months ago #8510307      

@Gatchan Fingers appear and disappear on comics all the time. That is a common thing. The hook is smaller in the 4th panel (from perspective). Sam's eyes don't seem to have any problem.



9 months ago #8508965      

Overall i like where the story is going. But i just want to comment on the inconsistency of this page. Panel 3 Talus grows an extra finger, and Uncle Peggy's hook in panel 4 is kinda weak looking in comparison to the one in the last panel. First panel Sam's eyes looks kind of out of focus as well. These are just a couple small details you may want to revise. But the angles and positioning of your characters are really well done and add to the way the story is being told.



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